Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly more natural and add a brief reason or additional detail to enrich the answer (one or two short sentences). Use a linking word if you add more than one sentence. Keep it concise and avoid repeating words (e.g., avoid saying “when I was a child” twice).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived close to the school.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but it contains grammar errors, repetition, and awkward phrasing. To improve: (1) Start with a clear topic sentence. (2) Use correct collective nouns and articles (e.g., “bikes”/“the bus”/“public buses”). (3) Limit to up to 3 short sentences and use linking words (e.g., “because,” “so,” “for example”). (4) Add a specific detail or example to make the content more concrete.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people find them cheaper and more convenient than taking the bus. For example, commuters often use bicycles to avoid traffic and reach work faster, especially in smaller cities.

× Yes, and bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people prefer to use bike more than a public buses because it is easier for them and more comfortable having their own transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people prefer to use bikes rather than public buses, since it is easier for them and more comfortable to have their own transportation.

Multiple plural and article errors: 'use bike' should be 'use bikes' (singular/plural agreement) and 'a public buses' mixes an indefinite article with a plural noun; use 'public buses' without 'a' or use 'a public bus' if singular. Also 'prefer to use X more than Y' is awkward; use 'prefer X rather than Y' or 'prefer X to Y'. 'Having their own transportation' needs 'to have' to form an infinitive after 'comfortable'. Suggestion: ensure nouns match singular/plural context, remove incorrect articles, and use correct comparative constructions and verb forms.