Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, verb choice and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and verbs (e.g., 'rode' or 'rode it'), and avoid extra unclear phrases. Add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep the answer under five sentences.

예시: Yes. My father bought me a pink bike for my birthday when I was seven, and I loved it. I rode it every day after school, and sometimes I invited my dad to ride with me around the neighborhood. It was lightweight and easy to handle, so I learned to ride confidently within a week.

제안: Clarify the idea and fix grammar and vocabulary. Use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), correct noun forms ('bikes are'), and give specific reasons or examples connected with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Avoid unclear time/place references like '2:00 station'—explain what you mean.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people commute short distances and traffic can be heavy. For example, students and office workers often cycle to nearby train stations or markets to save time and money, especially during rush hour.

× When I was a child, my dad bought me a pink color bike as a birthday present and I really love it.

✓ When I was a child, my dad bought me a pink bike as a birthday present and I really loved it.

Two issues: 'pink color bike' is incorrect phrasing; use 'pink bike' (adjective before noun). Also the student mixes past and present tense: 'bought' is past so 'I really loved it' should also be past to maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same time frame (past) when describing past events and use adjective + noun order. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I write it every day and invite my dad to.

✓ I rode it every day and invited my dad to come with me.

The original uses present tense 'write' incorrectly; likely intended 'ride' but verb form must match past narrative, so use past 'rode'. Also 'invite my dad to' is incomplete; add 'come with me' to complete the meaning. The issue falls under incorrect verb form and missing verb complement; ensure correct lexical verb and complete clause. Note: 'ride' past is 'rode'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I think bike is popular in our country because people always need to walk a lot from a long road between 2:00 station.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because people often have to walk long distances between stations.

Multiple errors: use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject (subject-verb agreement). 'Need to walk a lot from a long road between 2:00 station' is ungrammatical; better phrase 'have to walk long distances between stations.' Also '2:00 station' is unclear; if referring to two stations, use 'stations'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, match verb number, and use 'walk long distances' for natural English. Grammar problem type ID:1