Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes I did. I had a small pink bicycle when I was a child. I used to write to my piano lessons every Wednesday and I still remember learning to write it without training wheels when my grandfather helped me practice.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
I don't think so. People usually use cards or public transport rather rather than bicycles when they go out, mainly because the weather is often extreme, very hot in summer and very cold in winter. As a result, cycling isn't very practical for daily commuting here.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 68.0제안: 回答は内容が分かりやすく個人的なエピソードを含んでいて良いですが、いくつか改善点があります。まず、動詞の誤用（“write”は誤りで“ride”が正しい）を直してください。次に、文が冗長でまとまりに欠ける部分があるため、主題文（topic sentence）を明確にしてから、理由や具体的な詳細を1〜2文でつなげる練習をしてください。接続詞（for example, because, as a result, when）を使って文のつながりを明示するとより自然になります。また、文の数を5文以内に抑え、語彙を少し多様にして（e.g., “practice riding without training wheels”, “every Wednesday for piano lessons”）正確さと流暢さを高めてください。
예시: Yes. I had a small pink bicycle as a child. I rode it to my piano lessons every Wednesday, and I still remember learning to ride it without training wheels. My grandfather helped me practice in the park, which made me more confident on two wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 75.0제안: 全体として論理的で理由も示してあり良い応答ですが、小さな発音・語彙ミス（“cards”は文脈的に“cars”が適切）や語の重複（“rather rather”）を修正してください。接続詞は適切に使われていますが、もう一歩踏み込んで具体例（例:混雑、道路環境、安全面）を1つ加えると説得力が増します。語彙の幅を広げるために“practical”の代わりに“convenient”や“feasible”などを使い分ける練習をしてください。回答は直接的な主題文＋理由＋具体例の3文構成にまとめると自然です。
예시: Not really. Most people prefer cars or public transport rather than bicycles because the weather can be extreme, with very hot summers and cold winters. In addition, busy roads and limited cycling lanes make biking less convenient for daily commuting.
문법
× I used to write to my piano lessons every Wednesday and I still remember learning to write it without training wheels when my grandfather helped me practice.
✓ I used to go to my piano lessons every Wednesday and I still remember learning to ride it without training wheels when my grandfather helped me practice.
The original sentence incorrectly uses the verb 'write' where 'go' (attend) and 'ride' (use a bicycle) are required. This is a verb choice error that falls under Verb + -ing form because 'learning to ride' is the correct verb + to-infinitive structure for acquiring a skill, and 'go to' correctly expresses attending lessons. Suggestion: replace 'write to' with 'go to' for attending lessons and 'learning to write it' with 'learning to ride it'. Please note: keep verb forms consistent with past habits ('used to go') and use 'learning to ride' for the action of mastering bicycle riding.
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