Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, use correct verb forms, and keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Add a short supporting detail about the bike (e.g., who gave it, when, or a memory) and use linking words if you add extra information. For example, use past simple: “My mother bought me a bike for my birthday.” Then follow with one supporting detail: why it was special or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a small red bike for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because I was excited, I practiced until I could ride without help, which made that birthday very memorable.

제안: Improve grammar, vocabulary and sentence structure. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore). Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing: “Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient.” Avoid contractions or informal markers that obscure meaning.

예시: I think bikes are less popular now. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for commuting, especially in cities with long distances. As a result, fewer people use bicycles for daily travel, although some still ride them for exercise or leisure.

× When I was a child, my mom getting a spot for me, a bike as my presence on my birthday.

✓ When I was a child, my mom got a bike for me as a present on my birthday.

Grammar problem types matched: 5 (Past tense issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 8 (Verb + -ing form). The original sentence uses 'getting' incorrectly instead of the past tense 'got', and word order is confused ('spot' and 'presence' are wrong words). Use the simple past 'got' because the action happened in the past. Replace 'spot' and 'presence' with the correct noun 'present' and use the common phrase 'got a bike for me' to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions and keep standard word order: subject + past verb + object + purpose/time phrase.

× Nowadays people refers to choose ride motorbike 'cause it's more convenient and faster than ride a bike.

✓ Nowadays people prefer to ride motorbikes because they are more convenient and faster than riding a bike.

Grammar problem types matched: 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), 6 (Present tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions/infinitive), 8 (Verb + -ing form), 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'Refers to' is incorrect for expressing preference; use 'prefer' with correct subject-verb agreement ('people prefer'). Use the infinitive or gerund correctly: 'prefer to ride motorbikes' or 'prefer riding motorbikes.' Use plural 'motorbikes' to match 'people' and 'they are' for agreement. Use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. Use 'riding a bike' for the comparison (use gerund after 'than' in this structure). Suggestion: for general present facts use simple present with correct subject-verb agreement, choose correct verbs ('prefer'), and use parallel verb forms when comparing actions (prefer X to Y or prefer to X rather than Y).