Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is correct and concise, but it can be improved by adding a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word to connect ideas (for example, “and” or “because”). Mention when you got it, how often you used it, or a brief memory to make the response more engaging and natural.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I got it as a birthday present when I was eight. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and explore the neighborhood, which helped me feel independent and confident.

제안: This reply is too short and unclear. Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No/Somewhat) and then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words like “because,” “however,” or “on the other hand.” Aim for 2–3 sentences so the examiner can assess your language more fully.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances. However, they are common in cities among students and delivery workers who need a cheap and quick way to get around.

× I don't think.

✓ I don't think so.

The original sentence lacks a complement after the verb phrase 'don't think', making it sound incomplete. In English, when expressing a negative opinion about a general question (Do you think bikes are popular in your country?), speakers commonly add 'so' to complete the thought: 'I don't think so.' This provides the necessary object/complement. Suggestion: use 'I don't think so.' or provide a full clause such as 'I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'