Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct with grammar, give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Mention the unique feature clearly and explain why it mattered to you.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It had a reversible drive: pedaling forward made it go forward and pedaling backward made it go in reverse, which was unusual and fun. Because of this feature, I could easily park in tight spots and I enjoyed showing it to my friends.

제안: Start with a direct opinion sentence, then add two specific details with linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and repetition. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., motorcycle, scooter) and explain reasons for popularity or who uses which type.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In many households there are usually two types: a regular bicycle for children and a scooter for adults. Moreover, scooters are especially common among women because they are convenient for short trips and easy to park.

× I used to have a bicycle when I was young and that bicycle have has had one of the most unique feature which is that if you pedal it forward it will go forward and if you pedal it backward if it will go backward.

✓ I used to have a bicycle when I was young, and that bicycle had one of the most unique features: if you pedaled it forward, it would go forward, and if you pedaled it backward, it would go backward.

Multiple issues here involve incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'have has had' is a wrong sequence of verbs; the simple past 'had' is correct because the student is describing a past possession. 'Feature' should be plural 'features' to match 'one of the ... features.' 'Pedal' should be past tense 'pedaled' to match the past reference 'used to have' and 'would' is the correct modal for past habitual result. Use commas and a colon to clarify the clause. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits and pair with 'would' for repeated past results.

× It's the most unique feature I had in that by bicycle had it and I have never found.

✓ It was the most unique feature my bicycle had, and I have never found one like it since.

This sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Problems include redundant and misordered phrases ('I had in that by bicycle had it') and tense inconsistency. Use 'was' to keep past reference consistent with previous sentence and restructure to 'my bicycle had' to show possession. Use 'since' to indicate up to the present when saying 'I have never found one like it.' Suggestion: simplify the structure, keep consistent tense, and place possessive properly.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country uh almost every household has two types of bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country; almost every household has two types of bikes.

Main issue is punctuation and run-on structure rather than tense, but ensure present simple 'are' and 'has' agree with their subjects. 'Bikes are very popular' and 'almost every household has' are correct present simple uses to describe a general truth. Suggestion: separate clauses with a semicolon or period to avoid a run-on sentence and remove filler 'uh.'

× One is uh a normal bike and 1 is a scooter which is also known as scooty, majorly used by females in the family and scooty.

✓ One is a normal bike and the other is a scooter, also known as a scooty, which is mainly used by women in the family.

Problems: using digit '1' instead of word 'one' is informal; repetition of 'scooty' is redundant; 'majorly' is informal/incorrect — use 'mainly' or 'mostly'; 'females' is awkward in this context — use 'women.' Also clarify 'one' vs 'the other' for two items. Suggestion: use 'the other' to contrast two items, choose appropriate adverb 'mainly,' and prefer 'women.'