Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence (Past tense), then give one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid redundancy and limit to 3–4 sentences. For example, say you had a bike, whether you used it, why or why not, and mention briefly about recent changes using linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Also correct verb forms (had, didn’t use to ride, haven’t ridden).

예시: I had a bike when I was in primary school, but I didn’t use it very often because I was afraid of traffic. However, recently I’ve started riding occasionally to exercise and relax.

제안: Answer directly then add one or two clear, specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing. Mention the shared-bike system as a reason and give a short example or result (e.g. convenience, less traffic). Avoid fillers like 'uh' and complete the sentences. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because of a widely used shared-bike app. For example, people can unlock nearby bicycles with their phones, which makes commuting short distances cheaper and more convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike in my child like primary school, but I didn't used to ride bikes so I haven't ride bikes. Yeah, lately.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child in primary school, but I didn't use to ride it, so I haven't ridden bikes recently.

Problems: incorrect tense and verb forms. 'do have' conflicts with past context; use simple past 'had'. 'in my child like primary school' is ungrammatical — change to 'when I was a child in primary school'. 'didn't used to' is wrong because after 'did' the base form 'use' is required: 'didn't use to'. 'I haven't ride' uses base form instead of past participle; after 'have' use past participle 'ridden'. 'Lately' suggests recent time so place it with 'recently' and after the clause. Suggestion: match tense to context (past for childhood), use base form after did/didn't, and use past participle after have/has. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, it is popular in our country as we have a famous app that was You can use some, uh, public shared bicycles, umm, to ride from anywhere.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country because we have a well-known app that lets you use public shared bicycles to ride from anywhere.

Problems: incorrect pronoun/verb agreement and awkward phrasing. The subject 'bikes' (implied plural) requires plural verb 'are' rather than 'is'. 'a famous app that was You can use' is ungrammatical — combine into a relative clause with correct verb: 'an app that lets you use'. 'some' is unnecessary; 'public shared bicycles' is fine but 'public shared bicycles' sounds better without 'some'. Use 'well-known' instead of 'famous' for naturalness. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number agree, use a single clear relative clause and choose appropriate verbs for ability ('lets/allows'). Grammar problem type ID: 27