Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp; dùng câu chủ đề nêu rõ tình huống (ví dụ: không có xe đạp vì gia đình nghèo) rồi bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: làm thế nào bạn đến trường, hoặc tại sao bạn không thích đi xe đạp). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như "because", "so", hoặc "therefore" để kết nối ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was quite poor. As a result, I usually walked to school or took public transport. I also wasn't very interested in cycling at that time.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp (có hoặc không) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Tránh tiếng ừ ừ và lỗi từ vựng như "writing" thay vì "riding". Dùng một câu chủ đề (ví dụ: "Yes, I think they are popular") rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ai thường đi xe, ở đâu, vì sao). Sử dụng liên từ như "because", "for example" để làm rõ lý do. Giữ cấu trúc ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác từ vựng.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and students. For example, many kids ride bikes around their neighborhoods and to school because it's cheap and convenient.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my. Someone is very poor in that time and I didn't, and I don't like to ride a bike much.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor at that time, and I didn't like to ride bikes much.

The original contains fragmented clauses and incorrect word order. 'my.' is incomplete; it should be 'my family'. 'Someone is very poor in that time' is incorrect tense and subject; use 'my family was very poor at that time'. 'I didn't, and I don't like to ride a bike much' mixes past and present awkwardly — keep past: 'I didn't like to ride bikes much'. Suggestions: complete fragments, use correct subject 'family', match past tense 'was', use 'at that time' for reference, and keep consistent tense.

× I don't know much about. Umm bikes in my country umm but in my country children are very enjoy writing bikes in every street and.

✓ I don't know much about bikes in my country, but children enjoy riding bikes on every street.

The sentence is fragmented and contains wrong verbs and word order. 'I don't know much about.' is incomplete; attach object 'bikes'. 'children are very enjoy writing bikes' uses incorrect auxiliary and verb: use 'children enjoy riding bikes'. 'writing' is wrong word. 'on every street' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestions: remove filler words, complete the object, use correct verb 'enjoy' + gerund 'riding', and correct preposition 'on'.