Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and grammatically acceptable, but it is very short and offers no supporting details. To improve, add one or two specific details (e.g., what kind of bike, who taught you, or a short memory) using a linking word to connect ideas. Keep responses natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I used to have a small red bicycle when I was about seven. It had training wheels at first, and my father taught me to ride it in our local park, which made me feel very independent.

제안: The idea is clear but the sentence has grammatical errors, repeating words, and vague phrasing. Improve by using correct subject-verb agreement, removing repetitions, and providing a specific reason or example. Use a linking word (e.g., because, so, therefore) to connect cause and effect and keep it to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and commuting. For example, adults often join cycling clubs on weekends, so riding has become a common and trendy activity.

× Bike is pretty popular in my country because it's such like a pretty popular sports for adults, so a lot of people using bikes as a trend currently currently.

✓ Bikes are pretty popular in my country because cycling is a popular sport for adults, so a lot of people are using bikes as a trend currently.

Errors identified: 1) 'Bike is' uses singular noun where general statement needs plural: use 'Bikes are' (Singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement). 2) 'such like' is nonstandard; use 'such as' or just rephrase. 3) 'a pretty popular sports' mixes singular article and plural noun; change to 'a popular sport' or 'popular sport'. 4) 'so a lot of people using bikes' lacks auxiliary verb for continuous aspect; use 'are using' (present participle requires auxiliary). 5) Repeated word 'currently currently' is redundant. Correction addresses these: 'Bikes are' fixes plural and subject-verb agreement, 'cycling is a popular sport' replaces awkward phrase, and 'are using' provides correct present continuous form. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number match (singular/plural), avoid casual fillers like 'such like', use appropriate articles with countable nouns, include auxiliary verbs with -ing forms for continuous tenses, and avoid repeated words.