Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, complete answer and add one or two specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain with a linking word. Avoid one-word replies and hesitations.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike when I was about eight. For example, I often rode it to the park with my friends after school, and we would race each other on the bike path.

제안: Respond directly and expand with specific reasons or examples using linking words (because, so, for example). Remove fillers and be more precise about what you mean by “more popular.”

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so cycling has become a common way to get around.

× With my friends.

✓ Yes, I did. I rode a bike with my friends.

The original reply is a sentence fragment without a main verb or subject, so it does not properly answer the examiner's question. This falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26). Provide a complete sentence that matches the past tense question 'Did you have...?' by using past tense auxiliary 'did' or a full past tense clause. Suggestion: answer briefly with 'Yes, I did.' or use a full sentence like 'Yes, I had a bike and rode it with my friends.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah, it's, uh, it's more popular.

✓ Yes, they are more popular now.

The student's sentence uses 'it's' (singular) but refers to 'bikes' (plural) and mixes vague present reference. This involves present tense and number agreement issues (closest match: Present tense issue, ID 6), and also subject-verb agreement. Correct by using the plural subject 'they' with the plural verb 'are' and a clearer time reference such as 'now' if comparing present popularity. A concise correction: 'Yes, bikes are more popular now.' Grammar problem type ID:6