Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, concise and directly answer the question with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe it briefly (type or how often you rode it), and explain one reason or memory. Focus on correct tense and simple connectors like “because”, “so”, or “for example.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a simple blue bicycle that I rode almost every day when I was eight to ten years old, because it was my main way to get around the neighborhood. For example, I often cycled to my friend’s house after school and we would play until dinner.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, however). Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and replace vague phrases. Mention who uses bikes and for what purposes, and add a short comparison or limitation if relevant.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. However, they are less often used for recreation because there are few dedicated bike paths in cities.

× Yes of course, I just have a bicycle because every student used to do ex exercise and the physical when they were young because yeah it's helped people like cold outside and do activity.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bicycle because every student used to do exercise and physical activities when they were young; it helped people stay active even when it was cold outside.

Issues identified: 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match the past time frame (Past tense issue, ID 5). The phrase 'ex exercise and the physical' is ungrammatical and should be 'exercise and physical activities' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'It's helped' mixes present perfect with a past context; 'it helped' fits the past narrative (Past tense issue, ID 5). Also punctuation and sentence separation improve clarity. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events, choose correct noun forms ('exercise', 'physical activities'), and break into clearer clauses with appropriate punctuation.

× Yes, I think bicycle is is popular in my country because everyday life they use bicycle to go to the work, go to the school, but it's not like multiple P place to exercise. So yeah.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because in everyday life people use bicycles to go to work and to school, but there are not many public places for exercise.

Multiple errors: 'bicycle is is popular' should be plural 'bicycles are popular' to agree with general statement (Singular and plural issue, ID 1; Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'everyday life they use bicycle' is ungrammatical; use 'in everyday life people use bicycles' (Incorrect use of pronouns and singular/plural, IDs 12 and 1). 'to the work, go to the school' should be 'to work and to school'—omit definite article with general institutions and use parallel structure (Article errors, ID 22; Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'it's not like multiple P place' is unclear; 'there are not many public places for exercise' corrects meaning and uses proper plural and quantifier (Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 14; Incorrect adjective/order, ID 18). Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits, correct articles (omit 'the' with work/school when speaking generally), and use clear quantifiers like 'many' and 'public places'.