Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be sure to answer in the past tense and give a short, natural expansion. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific details (for example who gave it to you, how you used it, or a memorable moment). Use linking words if you add details. Keep to at most 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school with my friends every day. I remember learning to ride in the park and falling a few times before I got comfortable.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar: use the word 'bikes' and avoid capitalization errors. Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., traffic, bike-sharing schemes, culture, geography). Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example'. Keep answers concise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many cities are crowded and people use them to avoid traffic. For example, there are several bike-sharing schemes in the city and many students ride bikes to university every day.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The examiner asked a question in the past tense ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the response should match that past timeframe. Using present tense 'have' is incorrect because it implies current possession. Change to past tense 'had' to agree with the question's time reference and maintain subject-verb tense consistency. Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers in the question (e.g., 'when you were a child') and use the corresponding tense in your answer.

× Actually yes, the Pikes are common in my country.

✓ Actually yes, bikes are common in my country.

The word 'Pikes' is incorrect and appears to be a misspelling or wrong word choice for 'bikes'. This is a word choice/orthography error affecting meaning. Also capitalization of 'Pikes' is unnecessary. Use the common noun 'bikes' in lowercase. Suggestion: Use the correct vocabulary and check spelling; 'bikes' correctly refers to bicycles and matches the plural noun required by the question about general popularity.