Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn; tránh lặp từ (used to) quá nhiều và sửa lỗi từ vựng/grammatical (ví dụ “bar” có lẽ là “bike” hoặc “bike’s bar” không hợp lý). Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó một hoặc hai câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: màu sắc, kiểu, tần suất sử dụng). Dùng từ nối đơn giản nếu cần (for example, so, because).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bicycle that I loved, and I rode it to school almost every day when I was about ten. For example, I would cycle with my friends along the park on weekend mornings, which helped me stay active and made my commute fun.

제안: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc và chính xác hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ “device” không đúng, câu bị lẫn lộn). Nên đưa ra câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No and why), rồi nêu lý do cụ thể với ví dụ hoặc so sánh (e.g., motorbikes are more common for adults, bikes are common among children and elderly). Dùng linking words như "however", "because", "for example" để tổ chức ý. Tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi số nhiều/đếm.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly common, but they are less popular than motorbikes for daily commuting. For example, many adults prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient in traffic, while children and some elderly people still use bicycles for short trips or exercise.

× I used to have a fashionable bike when I was a kid and this bar used to be a way that I used to commute every day.

✓ I used to have a fashionable bike when I was a kid and this bike was the way I commuted every day.

The original sentence misuses 'used to' repeatedly and uses 'bar' instead of 'bike'. Use 'used to' for past habitual action only once per clause ('I used to have'). For describing the means, use simple past: 'this bike was the way I commuted' or better 'this bike was how I commuted'. Avoid stacking 'used to' with another past-tense verb; choose one clear past form. Suggestions: replace 'bar' with 'bike', remove extra 'used to' before 'commute', and use 'commuted' (simple past) to match 'used to' context.

× To be honest, yes, on the device is not popular compared to motorbike is my country is both.

✓ To be honest, yes, bikes are not as popular as motorbikes in my country.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and word order: 'on the device' is unclear and 'motorbike is my country is both' is ungrammatical. Use the plural noun 'bikes' and compare with 'motorbikes' using 'not as ... as'. Keep subject and verb agreement: 'bikes are'. Suggestions: use 'bikes are not as popular as motorbikes in my country'. Use clear subjects and correct comparative structure.

× There's a lot of user about users in my country, especially the kids or the elderly.

✓ There are a lot of users in my country, especially children and the elderly.

The original mixes singular/plural and uses 'there's' with plural noun. Use 'there are' for plural 'a lot of users'. 'Kids' is informal; 'children' is more appropriate. Use 'and' not 'or' when listing groups together. Suggestions: say 'There are a lot of users in my country, especially children and the elderly.' to fix verb agreement and word choice.