Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and directly answer the question with a short topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unrelated phrases (e.g. "I'm also tired") and correct grammar (use past tense consistently). Use a linking word to connect ideas. For example: start with "Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child." then add why or how you used it: "I used it to ride to school every day because it was faster than walking."

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I rode it to school every day because it was faster and more convenient than walking, and I enjoyed cycling with my friends on weekends.

제안: Give a clear, structured opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and incorrect word choices ("purple", "peoples"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" correctly, and keep sentences concise. Correct grammar: "many people use them for business and daily routines."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting to work and students ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient in busy cities.

× I'm also tired, I go to school and close with bicycle.

✓ I was also tired; I used to go to school and commute by bicycle.

Student used present tense 'I'm' and present simple 'I go' when describing childhood, which requires past tense. Also 'close with bicycle' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'used to' for habitual past actions and 'commute by bicycle' or 'go by bicycle' for travelling. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and natural verbs for movement (e.g. 'used to go', 'commuted by bicycle').

× Yeah, uh, like somebody purple in my country, uh, because many peoples, uh, use them business and daily routine, for example, pick me, go to work, some students are going to school so.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular in my country because many people use them for business and daily routines; for example, people ride them to work and students go to school by bicycle.

Multiple plural and word choice errors: 'somebody purple' is unclear and incorrect; 'peoples' should be 'people' (uncountable/plural noun); 'use them business and daily routine' needs prepositions and articles ('use them for business and daily routines'); 'pick me' is incorrect — likely intended 'for example, people ride them to work'. Use 'go to school by bicycle' to show means of transport. Suggestion: replace incorrect words with 'people', add 'for' before purposes, and use 'ride/commute by' for travel by bicycle.