Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Extend your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and make it more natural. For example, briefly say what kind of bike it was, how often you used it, or a memorable experience. Keep answers concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it almost every afternoon around my neighborhood. Because my parents lived nearby, they often walked with me for safety, so I felt confident learning to ride on my own.

제안: Give a topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples to support your opinion, using linking words for coherence. Mention where bikes are popular (cities, rural areas), who uses them (students, commuters), and any trends (bike lanes, bike-sharing schemes). Keep it natural and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, students often cycle to school and cities have introduced dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, which has increased their use recently.

× Yes, I think the bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The definite article 'the' before 'bikes' is unnecessary when speaking about bikes in general. Use the plural noun without an article to refer to the whole category. Suggestion: omit 'the' when making general statements about a category (e.g., 'Cars are expensive'). This fits the present-tense question about general popularity.