Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (tense consistency and articles), make the response concise and natural, and add one clear supporting detail. Use a topic sentence, then one or two short supporting sentences with linking words. For example, use past tense for childhood and past simple for events that happened (e.g., “I didn’t have a bike as a child. Later, my parents bought me one when I was a young adult, and I used it to go to college.”).

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, when I was a young adult my parents bought one for me, and I used it to ride to college every day.

제안: Clarify meaning, fix grammar and word choice, and provide a specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “Yes, bikes are popular because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and workers commute by bike.”). Avoid ambiguous phrases like “left to riding bike” and be careful with gender statements unless you can support them.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers commute by bike, and sports motorcycles are also common among young men.

× No I don't have any bike when I was a child but when I was young adult my parents bought a bike for me and I'm ride it and going to college.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but when I was a young adult my parents bought a bike for me and I rode it to college.

Multiple article and tense errors: 'any bike' is incorrect; use 'a bike' for singular countable noun (Article errors). Also 'I don't have' conflicts with past timeframe; use past tense 'I didn't have' (Past tense issue - ID 5) and 'I rode it to college' corrects 'I'm ride it and going to college' which mixes present continuous and incorrect verb forms. Suggestions: use 'a' before singular countable nouns, match verb tense to time expressions (use past tense for 'when I was...'), and use simple past 'rode' and 'to college' as destination.

× No I don't have any bike when I was a child but when I was young adult my parents bought a bike for me and I'm ride it and going to college.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but when I was a young adult my parents bought a bike for me and I rode it to college.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses: 'I don't have' is present but refers to a past period; use 'I didn't have' (Past tense). 'I'm ride it and going to college' is ungrammatical; use simple past 'I rode it to college.' Suggestions: keep past time reference consistent by using past simple verbs for actions that happened in the past.

× People love to riding bike, mostly males are left to riding bike and females are also sports bike attract males a lot.

✓ People love riding bikes; mostly males ride bikes, and females who ride sports bikes also attract a lot of attention from males.

'Love to riding' incorrectly mixes infinitive and -ing form; use 'love riding' (Verb + -ing form - ID 8). 'Ride' should be present simple 'ride bikes' for habitual actions (Present tense). Also plural 'bikes' needed (Singular and plural issue - ID 1). Suggestions: use 'love' + gerund for preferences, use present simple for habitual actions, and use plural 'bikes' for general statements.

× People love to riding bike, mostly males are left to riding bike and females are also sports bike attract males a lot.

✓ People love riding bikes; mostly males ride bikes, and females who ride sports bikes also attract a lot of attention from males.

'Love to riding' incorrectly combines 'to' with a gerund; after verbs like 'love' use either 'to' + infinitive ('to ride') or gerund ('riding'), but not 'to riding.' Also 'left to riding' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'prefer riding' or 'mostly males ride.' Suggestions: use 'love riding' or 'love to ride', use 'ride' for habitual present, and pluralize 'bikes.'

× People love to riding bike, mostly males are left to riding bike and females are also sports bike attract males a lot.

✓ People love riding bikes; mostly males ride bikes, and females who ride sports bikes also attract a lot of attention from males.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally. Also 'sports bike' should be 'sports bikes' if referring to the category. Suggestions: use plural nouns for generalizations and ensure noun forms match intended meaning.