Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 시제, 단수·복수 일치에 주의하고, 응답을 간결하게 정리하세요. 예를 들어 과거 경험을 묻는 질문에는 과거 시제를 사용하고, 이유를 덧붙일 때는 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복을 피하고 한두 문장으로 핵심을 말한 뒤 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항을 추가하세요.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought bicycles were dangerous, so they didn't allow me to ride one. As a result, I learned to enjoy walking and playing other outdoor games instead.

제안: 응답은 자연스럽고 관련 세부사항을 포함하고 있으나 더 구체적인 예시나 비교를 추가해 설득력을 높이세요. 연결어(for example, moreover, however)를 사용해 문장들을 자연스럽게 이어주고, 가능하면 빈도나 장소 등 구체적 수치를 넣으면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in South Korea. For example, I often see many children cycling in parks and elderly people riding bikes for exercise, especially on weekends. In addition, city bike-sharing programs have made cycling more common in urban areas.

× No, actually I don't have a bike.

✓ No, actually I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child (past time). The verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Use 'didn't have' for negative past simple. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions (when I was a child).

× When I was young, my family think that bike was so dangerous for me, even though I wanted to have one, my parents don't allow me to ride a bike.

✓ When I was young, my family thought that bikes were too dangerous for me; even though I wanted to have one, my parents didn't allow me to ride a bike.

Multiple past-tense errors and agreement issues: 'think' should be past 'thought' to match 'When I was young'. 'bike' as a general concept needs plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' depending on meaning; here 'bikes were too dangerous' reads naturally. 'so dangerous' is colloquial; 'too dangerous' is more appropriate. 'don't allow' should be past 'didn't allow'. Also improve clause punctuation (use semicolon or separate sentences). Suggestion: keep all verbs in past simple when describing past habitual beliefs and actions, and use plural for general categories.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in South Korea.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in South Korea.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present tense appropriately to state a current opinion. No change needed.

× When I go to the park, there are lots of children riding bikes and also elderly people use bike to exercise.

✓ When I go to the park, there are lots of children riding bikes, and elderly people also use bikes to exercise.

Minor issues: 'use bike' should be 'use bikes' (plural) because referring to people using bicycles generally. Word order 'also' is better placed before 'use' or after the subject; here 'elderly people also use bikes' sounds natural. Tense 'When I go' is present habitual, so present simple is correct. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches general plural context and place 'also' in a natural position.