Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the question first if unsure, then answer directly with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid asking a question back that confuses the examiner. Use natural phrases such as “Do you mean a bicycle or a motorbike?” if you need clarification, then respond: “Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it to go to school and play with friends, and I often rode it around the neighborhood on weekends.” This keeps the answer clear, natural, and within the 5-sentence limit.

예시: If unsure: “Do you mean a bicycle or a motorbike?” Then answer: “Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it every day to cycle to school, and at weekends I rode it with my friends to the park. Riding taught me independence and was also good exercise.”

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition. For example: start with “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country,” then add reasons with linking words like “because” or “for example,” and provide specific details (e.g. types of bikes, uses, or trends). Keep it concise and grammatical.

예시: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, younger people prefer mountain bikes and e-bikes for recreation, while others use simple city bikes to get to work. As a result, bike lanes and shops selling different models have become common.”

× Motorbike or bike cycle?

✓ Motorbike or bicycle?

The original sentence uses 'bike cycle', which is a redundant and nonstandard combination. This is an issue of word choice and pronoun/ noun usage rather than a grammatical tense. Replacing with 'bicycle' or simply 'bike' makes the question clear and natural. Suggestion: use 'bicycle' if you want a formal word, or 'bike' for informal speech.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because like my generation now enjoy to ride on bike and like they like more types of bikes which is actually.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because people in my generation enjoy riding bikes now, and they like many different types of bikes.

There are several problems here: incorrect verb form and tense ('enjoy to ride' should be 'enjoy riding' — verb + -ing form), awkward pronoun use ('my generation now enjoy' should agree in number and be clarified), redundant filler word 'like' used several times, and incorrect phrase 'ride on bike' (preposition use). According to the problem list, applicable types are 6 (Present tense issue), 8 (Verb + -ing form), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). The corrected sentence uses the present simple tense correctly for habitual action ('enjoy riding'), uses the gerund after 'enjoy', removes redundant 'like' fillers, corrects preposition to no preposition before 'bike' when using 'ride' (or 'ride a bike'), and clarifies plural agreement with 'people in my generation'. Suggestion: say 'people in my generation enjoy riding bikes' or 'my generation enjoys riding bikes' and avoid filler 'like'.