Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), remove redundancy, and organize into a clear topic sentence with one or two supporting details. Use linking words and correct pronouns/articles. Also avoid filler repetitions ("it's a good, it's a good").

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it around the neighbourhood almost every day. It helped me get regular exercise and clear my mind after school.

제안: Make your opinion concise and support it with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and correct collocations ("environment pollution" → "environmental pollution", "beneficial with" → "beneficial for").

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work or school because it reduces environmental pollution and improves personal health, so I consider it a very practical option.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('Did you have...when you were a child?') so a simple past response is required. 'I have' is present perfect and does not match the past time marker. Use 'I did' to agree with the past-tense question.

× Back in my childhood my parents bought a bicycle for me and I usually rode it near the neighborhood every day and it it's a good way to exercise and release my mind.

✓ Back in my childhood my parents bought a bicycle for me and I usually rode it around the neighborhood every day, and it was a good way to exercise and relax my mind.

Multiple issues: the sentence mixes tenses and contains repetition and word choice errors. 'Bought' and 'rode' are correct simple past forms for past events. Use 'around the neighborhood' not 'near the neighborhood' for natural collocation. 'It it's' is a typo and incorrect; use 'it was' to keep past tense consistent. 'Release my mind' is incorrect collocation; 'relax my mind' is idiomatic. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× Yes, I recall it is quite popular.

✓ Yes, I recall that it is quite popular.

This sentence is largely correct but needs the conjunction 'that' after 'recall' for clarity when reporting a remembered fact. The present tense 'is' is acceptable because the question asks about current popularity.

× For my perspective, it's a good, it's a good way to reduce the environment pollution and it's beneficial with personal health.

✓ From my perspective, it's a good way to reduce environmental pollution and it's beneficial for personal health.

Use 'From my perspective' instead of 'For my perspective'. 'Reduce the environment pollution' is incorrect word order and article use; use 'reduce environmental pollution'. 'Beneficial with personal health' is incorrect preposition; use 'beneficial for personal health'. Also remove duplicated phrase 'it's a good, it's a good'.

× So it's a good for me.

✓ So it's good for me.

The article 'a' should not be used before the adjective 'good' when followed by 'for me'. 'It's good for me' is the correct idiomatic phrase.