Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer repeated the examiner's question and did not directly respond. For Part 1 you should answer immediately with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your total response to no more than 4–5 sentences and avoid repeating the question. Focus on natural phrasing and relevant vocabulary (e.g., "ride", "own", "share").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it every day to ride to school and visit friends. Because I lived in a small town, cycling was a convenient and fun way to get around.

제안: Your answer contains relevant ideas but has hesitations, repetition and some grammar problems. Start with a clear topic sentence (directly answering the question), then expand with 2–3 concise, specific details linked logically (use linking words like "because", "for example", "so"). Reduce fillers (uh, um) and repetitive phrases, and correct verb forms (e.g., "used to use bikes"). Aim for varied but appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "common", "mode of transport", "plains").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical. For example, in the Tarai region, which is flat, many people use bicycles to travel to school, work and clinics. As a result, cycling is an everyday mode of transport for a large number of people.

× I do things, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student used 'do things' incorrectly instead of the verb 'think' to express opinion in present tense. Use 'think' to state belief. Suggestion: say 'I think' or 'I believe' when giving an opinion about the present.

× Uh, as I'm Speaking of now, uh, I used to live in Tarai.

✓ As I'm speaking now, I used to live in the Tarai region.

The phrase 'as I'm Speaking of now' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'As I'm speaking now' to indicate current speech, and add 'region' for clarity. Also fix capitalization: 'speaking' should be lowercase.

× Tara is the flat plains, you know, in Nepal, so many people are used, used bike at used bike as a mode of transportation for them.

✓ The Tarai is a flat plain in Nepal, so many people used bikes as a mode of transportation.

Multiple article and number errors: use 'The Tarai' (specific region), 'a flat plain' (singular), and 'used bikes' (plural) rather than 'used bike'. Remove redundant words 'used, used' and incorrect preposition 'at'. Also simplify 'for them' which is unnecessary.

× They used to go to school, go to hospital, go to work in bikes.

✓ They used to go to school, go to the hospital, and go to work by bike.

'Go to hospital' needs the article 'the' in this context; in English we say 'go to the hospital'. Also transportation uses the preposition 'by' with vehicle: 'by bike'. Use parallel structure and include 'and' before the last item.