Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., "then", "after") but avoid repetition and filler (e.g., "uh"). Mention specific time and brief reason to enrich the response. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I learned to ride when I was a teenager, and I bought my first bike after finishing high school because I wanted more independence for getting around.

제안: Start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "and", "for example"). Be specific about locations or contexts (e.g., city name) and finish the sentence clearly — avoid unfinished phrases like "which may."

예시: Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are much easier to use in congested areas like Dhaka. For example, commuters can weave through traffic quickly, and biking is also a healthy, low-cost way to travel.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I could not ride a bike then after learning riding a bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I could not ride a bike then; after learning to ride a bike, I got one.

Errors: sentence run-on and incorrect verb forms. 'after learning riding a bike' is ungrammatical. Use 'learning to ride a bike' (infinitive after 'learning') or 'learning how to ride a bike'. Also the sequence of events needs clear punctuation or conjunction: separate the inability in childhood from the later acquisition. Suggestion: use a semicolon or separate into two sentences and use the infinitive 'to ride'.

× Then I got my bike after my, uh, high school.

✓ Then I got my bike after high school.

Redundant filler 'uh' removed and article misuse corrected. 'after my high school' is unnatural in English; use 'after high school' to indicate the time period following graduation. Maintain past tense 'got' which is appropriate.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in heavy traffic jam area inside haka moving with a bike is much easier and biking is very good for health which may.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in heavy traffic jam areas, especially inside Haka, moving by bike is much easier, and biking is very good for your health.

Several preposition and noun errors: use plural 'areas' after 'heavy traffic jam'; 'inside haka' likely refers to a place name and should be capitalized 'Haka' and preceded by 'in' or 'inside Haka' kept but clarified. 'moving with a bike' is unnatural; use 'moving by bike' or 'going by bike'. The clause 'which may' is incomplete and unclear; remove it or complete the idea. Also add 'your' before 'health' for natural expression. Suggestions: pluralize nouns where general, use 'by' for means of transport, capitalize proper nouns, and avoid dangling fragments.