Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と語彙の誤りを直し、文を簡潔で自然にすること。特に「bike」と「back」「borrow advice」などの誤用を正し、主語・時制を明確にして一貫した文を作る。不要な繰り返しを避け、主文（I didn't have a bike when I was a child）→補足（I often borrowed a bicycle from neighbours to ride）という構成で、接続詞や過去形表現を正しく使う練習をする。

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I often borrowed one from my neighbours to ride around the neighbourhood.

제안: 内容を具体化し、文法と語順を整えること。場面（通勤や通学）を明示し、割合や頻度を表す語を使って具体性を出す。接続語を正しく使い、冗長な表現を避ける。例えば主張（Yes, they are）→理由（many people use them）→具体例（commuting, students）という流れでまとめる練習をする。

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular. Many people use them for short trips, especially students and office workers who ride to school or work to avoid traffic.

× And no, I, I didn't have a back, but I I use I I often, I often borrow advice. I I I I often borrow a bicycle and have have ridden.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I often borrowed a bicycle and rode it.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choice ('back' should be 'bike'), repetitive filler words, mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms ('use' and 'have ridden' used improperly). Use past tense consistently for a past habit: 'often borrowed' or 'used to borrow' and simple past 'rode' for the action. Remove filler repetitions to make the sentence clear. Suggested improvement: think of the intended meaning and choose correct vocabulary (bike), maintain consistent past tense, and eliminate repeated fillers.

× Yes, I think so because. It's not so many people, but exactly number of people ride bicycles to go to their office or schools and so on.

✓ Yes, I think so because not many people ride bicycles to go to their offices or schools; however, a certain number of people do.

The original sentence contains incorrect structure and quantifier usage. 'It's not so many people' is ungrammatical; use 'not many people'. 'Exactly number of people' is incorrect — use 'a certain number of people' or 'a considerable number of people'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'offices' plural matches 'people'. Also combine clauses properly and avoid sentence fragments. Suggested improvement: replace informal fragments with coherent phrases and correct quantifiers.