Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly about your own experience rather than asking the examiner a question. Give a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details (age, how often you rode, a memory) and keep it within 1–3 sentences. Use linking words like “when” or “and” to connect ideas.

예시: Yes. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. When I wasn’t riding, I practiced balancing in the park until I could ride without training wheels.

제안: Provide a clear opinion with specific reasons and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (who uses bikes, for what, and maybe a brief comparison). Use linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “in particular.” Avoid repetition and fix sentence structure.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines because many people use them to commute short distances and save money on transport. For example, motorbike taxis and bicycle couriers are common in cities, and in rural areas people often ride to the market or to work.

× 'In my country Philippines, bike is useful for the the used to work every day.'

✓ 'In my country, the Philippines, bikes are useful for people who used to travel to work every day.'

'Singular and plural issue: The noun "bike" should be plural (bikes) because it refers to bicycles in general. Additionally, the original sentence has extra words and unclear structure ("the the used to work"). I corrected the country name punctuation by adding commas and clarified the intended meaning by using "people who used to travel to work every day." Suggestion: when talking about things in general use the plural form (bikes) and restructure the clause to clearly show the subject (people) and the action (used to travel to work).'