Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), reduce redundancy, and follow Basic Structure: give a clear topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words. For example, say you didn’t have a bike but you used a bicycle sometimes, explain when and why, and avoid repeating words.

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a simple bicycle that I used occasionally. For instance, I often rode it to the nearby park on weekends to exercise and play with friends.

제안: Make the answer more precise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example using linking words. Avoid repetition and use more precise vocabulary (commute, errands, recreation).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people commute to work or run short errands by bicycle, especially in crowded city areas where traffic is a problem.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but I have a cycle which I used for cycling and go to the park for exercising.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle which I used to cycle and to go to the park for exercise.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time 'when I was a child' causing tense inconsistency (Present tense issue, ID 6). Also 'was child' is missing the article 'a' (Article errors, ID 22) and 'cycle' is better as 'bicycle' in this context. 'Used for cycling and go to the park for exercising' is ungrammatical: use 'used to' + base verb or 'used' + infinitive; use parallel infinitives 'to cycle' and 'to go' and prefer 'exercise' as a noun. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout for past habits, add articles, and use parallel infinitive forms.

× Yes, definitely. Bikes are very common in my country and most of the population use bikes to go on work or some other some other activities.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are very common in my country and most of the population use bikes to go to work or for other activities.

The sentence correctly uses present simple for general facts but contains errors: 'go on work' is incorrect preposition and noun choice (should be 'go to work') (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). The phrase 'some other some other activities' repeats and is redundant (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Also consider subject-verb agreement: 'most of the population use' can be acceptable in informal speech, but 'most of the population uses' or 'most people use' is clearer (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestion: replace 'go on work' with 'go to work', remove duplication, and consider 'most people use bikes' for natural phrasing.