Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu tính tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ (had/didn't), tránh từ thừa và lặp từ. Thêm một câu giải thích ngắn gọn với từ nối để làm rõ lý do. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng "Yes, I did" hoặc "No, I didn't", rồi nêu lý do bằng "because" hoặc "so". Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, tránh nói từ như "well" và "yeah" không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn’t ride it very often because I lived in a busy city and my parents preferred I walk to school. As a result, I mostly used it for short rides in the park on weekends.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp từ và có lỗi ngữ pháp (thừa "is", dùng "because" nhiều lần). Nên bắt đầu trực tiếp ("Yes, I think so") rồi dùng liên từ hợp lý ("because", "for example") và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh tiếng ỳ ("umm", "uh"). Giữ 2–3 câu, nêu lý do và một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Vietnam because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many adults use bicycles to commute to markets or nearby shops, while children ride them for fun in parks.

× Well, I have, but I did not usually to ride a bike when I was a child. Yeah.

✓ Well, I did, but I did not usually ride a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'I have' with past context 'when I was a child' and incorrectly includes the infinitive marker 'to' after 'usually'. Use simple past 'I did' to match the past time reference and remove 'to' because after adverbs like 'usually' we use the base form of the verb. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with time expressions (use past for past time) and use 'usually' + base verb (usually ride).

× Umm, because my country is Vietnam and it's absolutely is very popular in my country because, uh, not only children but also adults, they ride bike a lot.

✓ Umm, my country is Vietnam and bicycles are very popular there because not only children but also adults ride bikes a lot.

Multiple issues: 'it's absolutely is' repeats the verb to be (remove one) and uses 'it's' plus 'is' redundantly. 'Very popular in my country' is repetitive when you already said 'my country'; use 'there' instead. 'Ride bike' needs plural 'bikes' or the gerund form 'ride bikes' and no extra pronoun 'they' after 'also adults' (avoid subject repetition). Also use third person plural agreement 'bicycles are'. Suggestion: simplify and avoid redundant words, ensure subject-verb agreement (bicycles are), and use plural for countable nouns when referring generally (bikes).