Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response is not relevant to the examiner's question and contains major grammatical and word-choice errors. To improve, first understand the question and answer directly about whether you owned a bicycle as a child. Use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who bought it, how often you rode it) and a linking word if needed. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight years old, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. Because it had training wheels, I learned to ride quickly and used it almost every day to visit friends and go to the park.

제안: Your reply does not address the question and contains unclear pronouns and word order mistakes. To improve, answer directly with an opinion (Yes/No/It depends), then support it with specific reasons or examples and a linking word to connect ideas. Use vocabulary relevant to transport and popularity (e.g., commuting, cycling lanes, eco-friendly). Keep responses concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are increasingly popular in my country. For example, many cities have built dedicated cycling lanes and more people use bikes for short commutes, especially students and workers trying to save money and reduce pollution.

× Did you have a boyfriend to wear a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used incorrect nouns and pronouns: 'boyfriend' and 'to wear' are unrelated to the examiner's question. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). The correct subject and object are 'you' and 'a bike', and the correct time expression is 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: listen for key nouns in the question and repeat them correctly; practice replacing incorrect words with the intended ones (bike, child) and use the past simple structure 'Did you have... when you were...'.

× Do you think he likes a popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student replaced the subject and adjective order incorrectly and used an unintended pronoun 'he' and the wrong phrase 'likes a popular'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). The examiner asked about 'bikes' (plural) and 'popular' is an adjective describing that noun: correct sentence is 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Suggestion: identify the noun being discussed and keep correct plural form and adjective-noun order; practice forming questions with 'Do you think + [noun] + are + [adjective]'.'