Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

모의고사Part12026-08-22 17:03:44

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Unfortunately, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride it.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people don't have vehicle so they prefer to use bikes or motorcycles.

평가

총점

총점: 6.0유창성과 일관성: 6.5발음: 6.0문법: 6.0어휘: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 72.0

제안: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, but it can be improved by adding a brief supporting detail and using a linking phrase. Avoid repeating negatives (didn't) close together and keep it natural. Make the response slightly longer (2–3 sentences) with a reason or short anecdote and a linking word such as "because" or "so" to make it coherent.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. At the time I didn't know how to ride one, so my parents didn't buy one for me; instead, I often borrowed my friend’s bike to play outside.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 78.0

제안: Your answer is relevant and gives a clear reason, but it would be stronger with more specific details or an example and a linking word to improve coherence. Also correct small grammar issues: use "a lot of people don't have vehicles" or "many people don't own cars." Limit to up to 3 sentences, and include a brief statistic, example or consequence to enrich the response.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars. For example, in my city you see bicycles and motorbikes used for commuting and delivering goods, which helps avoid traffic and saves money.

문법

Past tense issue

× Unfortunately, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride it.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride one.

The pronoun 'it' is grammatically acceptable but sounds awkward when referring to 'a bike'; 'one' is the appropriate pronoun to refer back to a countable noun previously mentioned. This is an issue of pronoun choice relating to reference rather than core tense, but to keep correction within the provided list, it is treated under Past tense issue because the sentence correctly uses past tense. Suggestion: use 'one' to refer to a previously mentioned countable object for clearer, more natural English.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people don't have vehicle so they prefer to use bikes or motorcycles.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people don't have a vehicle, so they prefer to use bikes or motorcycles.

The phrase 'don't have vehicle' lacks the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'vehicle'; this is an article/preposition-related error. Adding 'a' ('don't have a vehicle') is required. Also, a comma before 'so' improves sentence flow when showing result. Suggestion: remember singular countable nouns need an article ('a' or 'the') and use a comma before coordinating conjunctions that join independent clauses.

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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