Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and natural but too short and slightly repetitive ("did have"). To improve, use a concise topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (where, how often you rode, or a brief memory). Use a linking word if giving additional info. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, especially in the afternoons after school, and I remember learning to balance on it with my father's help.

제안: Your idea is clear but the sentence is grammatically awkward and lacks supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with one or two specific reasons (e.g., infrastructure, climate, affordability). Use linking words like 'because' or 'mainly' to connect ideas and correct word order ("motorbikes" and "cars"; "are more popular" or "people use motorbikes and cars more").

예시: Not really; people in my country prefer motorbikes and cars. This is mainly because the roads are designed for motorized vehicles and many journeys are long, so driving or riding a motorbike is more convenient.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Using 'did' with the main verb in a positive past simple sentence is redundant in English. Use the past simple form of the verb alone for affirmative statements. Correct structure: subject + past tense verb (I had). Suggestion: remove 'did' when making positive past-tense statements.

× No, I don't think that in our country use motorbike or cars is more popular.

✓ No, I don't think motorbikes or cars are more popular in our country.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and subject-verb agreement. 'I don't think that' should be followed by a clause with correct subject and verb order. Also 'motorbike or cars' mixes singular and plural; use 'motorbikes or cars' for parallel plural nouns. The verb must agree with the compound subject 'motorbikes or cars', so use 'are'. Suggestion: reorder the clause to 'motorbikes or cars are more popular in our country' and place it after 'I don't think'.