Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you used it, who you rode with, or a short memory). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences and avoid mixing tenses or unnecessary words.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends, which was how I spent most afternoons.

제안: Answer directly, use clear reasoning and relevant details. Begin with a topic sentence stating your view, then support it with specific, logical reasons (e.g., low cost, traffic, culture, or geography). Avoid unclear terms, filler sounds (uh), and incorrect or irrelevant facts. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) to make your answer coherent and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips in crowded cities. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or visit nearby markets, especially where public transport is limited.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present simple 'do have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' for past situations. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past facts or 'I used to have' for habitual past actions.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is Bangladesh.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I am from Bangladesh.

Repeating 'my country' is awkward; also 'because my country is Bangladesh' is grammatically acceptable but less natural. Use 'I am from Bangladesh' to explain reason. Tense is present and correct; this change improves clarity and naturalness.

× Most of the CDB uh is below average and it is fully efficient.

✓ Most people have a below-average income and there is limited efficiency in public transport.

The original sentence is unclear and contains an unclear noun 'CDB' and contradictory statements ('below average' + 'fully efficient'). This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Provide a clear noun phrase and consistent meaning. Suggestion: specify the intended subject (e.g. income, infrastructure) and use consistent descriptors.

× So I can write my own bike and everyone can ride his own bike with it uh.

✓ So I could buy my own bike and everyone can ride their own bikes.

'Write my own bike' is incorrect verb choice; likely meant 'buy'. Also 'his' is a gender-specific pronoun; use 'their' for general statements. Number agreement: 'their own bikes' matches plural 'everyone' understood collectively. Suggestion: use 'buy' for obtaining and 'their' for gender-neutral singular reference.