Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and possessive forms, and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes. I had a bike as a child. My mother gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and I still remember it because it was the first expensive gift I had ever received. It felt special and made me more confident riding around the neighborhood.

제안: Provide a direct opinion followed by specific reasons and clearer phrasing. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and correct countability/grammar (e.g., 'people' not 'every people'). Add a brief example or comparison to make it specific.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to run errands in busy city areas, so they save time and money compared with driving.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child in it gave me for my mother in my 5th birthday and I think it is very unforgettable moment in my life because it's my first expensive gift I have ever received.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my mother gave it to me for my 5th birthday, and I think it was a very unforgettable moment in my life because it was the first expensive gift I had ever received.

Multiple errors: wrong tense and verb forms (should use past simple 'had' and 'gave' for past events; past perfect 'had ever received' is appropriate to emphasize it was the first up to that past time). Also word order and pronoun objects were incorrect ('gave me for my mother' -> 'my mother gave it to me'). 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child'. Punctuation and clause linking needed correction. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past events and place object after verb (gave it to me); use articles where required and use past perfect to show 'first ever' before another past time if needed.

× Yes, why not? I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, why not? I think bicycles are popular in my country.

'Bikes' is plural and grammatically fine, but in formal responses 'bicycles' is a more suitable noun choice. This is an optional style change rather than a strict grammatical error. Suggestion: Use 'bicycles' in formal speaking or keep 'bikes' for informal speech.

× Every people like to ride a bike and because it is very comfortable and convenient for their lifestyle.

✓ Everyone likes to ride a bike because it is very comfortable and convenient for their lifestyle.

'Every people' is incorrect; the correct singular indefinite pronoun is 'everyone' or 'every person'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'likes' (third person singular). Remove the unnecessary conjunction 'and' before 'because'. 'Their' can be kept as a gender-neutral singular pronoun; alternatively use 'people's' or 'people in my country find them' to match plural. Suggestion: Use 'everyone' with singular verb, or rephrase to a plural subject (e.g., 'Many people like to ride bikes').