Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn; tránh tiếng ấp úng và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ: có/không, tuổi khi có xe, mô tả ngắn). Giữ tối đa 5 câu. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ nếu cần. Ví dụ các từ kết nối: "when", "because", "so" để làm câu mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about twelve because my parents wanted me to be more active. It was a blue mountain bike and I used it to ride to school and around the neighborhood.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý mạch lạc. Tránh lặp âm uhm, dùng liên từ (because, therefore, for example) và cung cấp lý do cụ thể (giao thông, chi phí, môi trường). Giữ dưới 5 câu, mỗi câu rõ chức năng: chủ đề + lý do/ ví dụ.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or market, especially in crowded cities. In addition, cycling is seen as a healthy and eco-friendly option.

× I think umm 12 or.

✓ I think I was about 12.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb, making it an incomplete sentence. Use a full clause that fits the past-time question: 'I think I was about 12.' This provides a subject (I), verb (was), and approximate age phrase. Avoid filler sounds like 'umm' in written responses; if necessary, use 'I think' to indicate uncertainty.

× Yes, I think it's really popular in the country because have everyone can uh, uh, inconvenience.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country because everyone can use them easily and they are convenient.

The original sentence contains several pronoun and structure errors: 'it's' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'bikes are' or 'they are.' The phrase 'because have everyone can' is ungrammatical; replace with 'because everyone can use them' or 'because they are convenient.' Also 'inconvenience' is the opposite meaning and the wrong word form; use 'convenient' as an adjective. The corrected sentence uses plural agreement, proper pronouns, correct word choice, and a clear causal structure.