Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không chính xác, dùng câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, hạn chế tiếng lấp đầy (uh). Nên sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “go sizing” không đúng; dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp), dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn và không quá dài — tối đa 3–4 câu.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with friends to explore the neighborhood and enjoy the fresh air. We usually visited a few local parks and a small café near the river, which made biking feel like a little adventure.

제안: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp hơn và logic hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: “somebody” nên là “people”, “convenient to save time” nên cụm hợp lý). Thêm lý do cụ thể, so sánh ngắn gọn giữa các phương tiện và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu.

예시: Not really. Most people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for daily commutes. Cars are used for longer trips, while public transport is less popular due to limited routes and schedules.

× Yes, of course, when I was younger I usually rode my bike with, uh, friends and it's really a good way to enjoy the fresh air and go sizing around my neighborhood with lots of famous destination.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was younger I usually rode my bike with friends, and it was really a good way to enjoy the fresh air and go cycling around my neighborhood with lots of famous destinations.

The error involves the incorrect use of the verb form 'sizing' instead of the gerund 'cycling'. Use 'go' + gerund (go cycling) for activities. Also changed 'it's' to 'it was' to match past tense 'when I was younger', and corrected plural 'destination' to 'destinations'. Suggestion: match verb forms and tense consistently; use 'go' followed by an -ing activity (go cycling), and ensure plural nouns are used when referring to multiple places.

× Actually not, people in my country often commuted by motorbike because it's faster and convenient to save time and also somebody can use car instead of public transport whenever they need to go far away.

✓ Actually not. People in my country often commute by motorbike because it is faster and more convenient to save time, and some people can use a car instead of public transport whenever they need to travel far away.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'commuted' should be present habitual 'commute' to match 'often' indicating general truth. 'it's faster and convenient' needs parallel structure 'faster and more convenient'. 'somebody can use car' is awkward; use 'some people' and include article 'a car'. 'go far away' is better expressed as 'travel far away'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, maintain parallel adjectives with comparative form, and use correct articles and plural/singular forms.