Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct tense and verb forms (use past simple) and avoid repetition. For example, say you owned a bike, describe its condition briefly, and mention a short memory or how you used it. Use linking words like "and" or "because" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was an old blue bicycle that my parents bought second-hand, and I used it to ride to a nearby park every afternoon.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with clear reasons and at least one specific example. Fix grammar (use singular/plural correctly and subject–verb agreement) and avoid filler words. Use linking words like "because" or "however" to connect your points and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport. For example, cities are crowded and there are few safe bike lanes, so cycling is uncommon for daily commuting.

× Yes, yes, I have a bike when I was a child, but this bike isn't a new bike because it uses to use.

✓ Yes, yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it wasn't new because it used to be used.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was a child'; use past tense 'had' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'Isn't a new bike' should be 'wasn't new' to match past context. The phrase 'it uses to use' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'used to be used' or better 'was used a lot' — here 'used to be used' uses the past participle correctly (Grammar Problem Type ID 9). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events in childhood and use the idiom 'used to' or 'was used' to describe habitual past actions. Suggested correction flows: 'I had a bike when I was a child, but it wasn't new because it had been used a lot.'

× I think I think the bikes isn't isn't pepper in my country because many people doesn't use bikes? Umm, so currently I don't use a bike.

✓ I think bikes aren't very popular in my country because many people don't use bikes. Currently, I don't use a bike.

Multiple issues: 'the bikes isn't' has subject-verb disagreement and unnecessary definite article and repetition; use plural subject 'bikes' with plural verb 'aren't' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27) and remove duplicate 'I think'. 'pepper' is a typo for 'popular' (not a grammar type here but corrected). 'many people doesn't use' uses 'doesn't' with plural subject; correct is 'don't' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). Also convert the question-like ending to a statement to match the context. Finally, 'currently I don't use a bike' is fine but add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number match (singular/plural) and avoid repeating words.