Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be natural, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (because the question is about childhood), correct grammar and word choice, remove redundancy, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., age when you got it, how it felt, or a short memory).

예시: Yes, I did. My first bike was black and had training wheels; my father gave it to me when I was six. I remember learning to pedal in the park and feeling very proud when he finally removed the training wheels.

제안: Answer directly and provide a specific reason or example. Use correct noun forms and reduce repetition (avoid saying both 'mode' and 'of transportation'). Add linking words (for example, because, such as) and one concrete detail (e.g., commuting, exercise, or statistics). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see students and office workers cycling to work, especially during rush hour.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession 'when you were a child', which is past time. Use past tense 'had' instead of present 'do have'. Keep tense consistent with the time expression.

× my very first bike was color black and it has training wheels on the back.

✓ my very first bike was black and it had training wheels on the back.

Use the adjective form directly after 'was' ('was black') rather than 'was color black'. Also, because the context is past, change 'has' to past 'had' to match the past tense.

× It was given to me by my father and writing it when I was little was so.

✓ It was given to me by my father, and I learned to ride it when I was little.

The original second clause 'writing it when I was little was so' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is learning or riding the bike; use 'I learned to ride it when I was little' to form a correct, meaningful clause and maintain past tense.

× There's a lot of kids and even adults using bike and they use it as their daily transport mode of transportation.

✓ There are a lot of kids and even adults using bikes, and they use them as their daily mode of transportation.

Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'kids'. 'A lot of' should be followed by plural noun 'kids' and plural 'bikes'. Also use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'bikes'. 'Mode of transportation' is redundant; 'mode of transportation' is fine but 'transport mode of transportation' repeats the idea, so use 'mode of transportation'.

× they are very popular here in my country.

✓ They are very popular here in my country.

Sentence is correct in grammar, but capitalize the pronoun 'They' at the start if it's a new sentence. No tense change needed; maintain present for a general statement. This suggestion notes capitalization rather than tense.

× using bike

✓ using bikes

When referring to the activity generally and plural users, use the plural noun 'bikes' rather than singular 'bike'. If you intended to use a preposition, 'using bicycles' is acceptable; here the main issue is plurality combined with correct noun form.