Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve past-tense accuracy, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, limit to 3–4 concise sentences, and add one specific detail (e.g., where or who gave it). Use linking words like "and" or "because" sparingly and correctly. Focus on correct verb forms (e.g., "I rode"), article use ("a bike"), and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it in the park and on quiet streets near my home. My parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I spent many afternoons practicing until I felt confident.

제안: Clarify your points and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, then provide two specific reasons with brief examples. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" correctly. Replace vague phrases ("it's is environment") with precise expressions ("they are environmentally friendly").

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. They are environmentally friendly because they produce no emissions, and they are convenient for short trips, for example commuting to nearby shops or schools. As a result, many people choose biking for daily travel.

× Yes, I ride a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I rode a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'ride' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'rode' to match the past time reference.

× I ride a bike in the park, in the streets or any other places I like it.

✓ I rode my bike in the park, in the streets, or in any other places I liked.

Maintain past tense to match the time frame. Also use possessive 'my bike' and change 'I like it' to past 'I liked' and add 'in' before 'any other places' for correct preposition use.

× And this bike is was my birthday present and it's so.

✓ And this bike was my birthday present.

The phrase 'is was' is an incorrect combination of present and past verbs; use past 'was'. The trailing 'and it's so' is ungrammatical and unnecessary, so remove it.

× Yes, a bike is so popular in my country because it's is environment.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are good for the environment.

Use plural 'bikes' and plural verb 'are' for general statements. 'It's is environment' is incorrect: replace with 'they are good for the environment' to convey reason and correct pronoun agreement.

× This is safe environment and this is comfortable transport and you can ride it every time you need.

✓ They provide a safe environment and comfortable transport, and you can ride a bike whenever you need to.

Sentence needs subject 'they' (bikes) to agree with verbs. Use plural verbs 'provide' and rephrase 'every time you need' to 'whenever you need to' for natural English. Also specify 'a bike' or 'bikes' consistently.