Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and include a brief linking phrase and a clear time reference. Use one topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Avoid filler words like “you know.”

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child and I loved riding it. However, after I had an accident when I was about nine, I stopped riding for many years. Since then I’ve been too nervous to ride regularly.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example using linking words. Reduce hesitations and use correct pronouns. Provide a broader context beyond a single observation.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, last week at the park I saw many people cycling for exercise and commuting, and in cities there are dedicated bike lanes that encourage more people to ride.

× Yes, I am used to have a bike and I really enjoyed a biking.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike and I really enjoyed biking.

The phrase 'am used to have' is incorrect. Use 'used to' to express a past habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue does not fit precisely; this is best covered by general past habitual usage—mapped to ID 6). Also, 'a biking' is incorrect because 'biking' is a gerund and does not need the article 'a'. Use 'enjoyed biking'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and drop the article before gerunds.

× However after a year or two I had an accident with that bike and since that time I've never ever, you know, bike bicycle anymore.

✓ However, after a year or two I had an accident with that bike and since that time I've never ridden a bicycle again.

'I've never ever ... bike bicycle anymore' contains several problems: 'bike bicycle' is redundant and ungrammatical; the verb form 'bike' as used here should be 'ridden' (past participle) when used with 'have' in the present perfect. 'Anymore' and 'never ever' together is awkward; use 'never' or 'never ever'. Also use 'since that time' correctly with present perfect: 'I've never ridden a bicycle (again) since then.' Suggestion: use present perfect ('have' + past participle) for actions from a past point to now and use 'ride' -> 'ridden' as past participle.

× Yes, I guess that, uh, their favorite among people because, uh, last week when I was, uh, in a park, uh, for playing tennis, I saw lots of people that were biking.

✓ Yes, I guess they are popular among people because last week when I was in a park playing tennis, I saw lots of people biking.

'Their favorite among people' is incorrect: 'their' is a possessive pronoun with no noun; the intended meaning is 'they are popular' (subject pronoun + verb). This is a subject-pronoun error (Grammar Problem Type ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns) and sentence structure could be improved. Also 'in a park, for playing tennis' is better as 'in a park playing tennis' to avoid awkward preposition use (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'That were biking' is acceptable but 'biking' without 'that were' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'they are popular' and combine clauses more fluently.

× So I guess that it's popular among people.

✓ So I guess that they are popular among people.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is plural, so 'it is popular' is incorrect due to pronoun and agreement error (Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 27). Use 'they are popular' to match the plural noun 'bikes'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.