Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, natural response that directly answers then adds one or two specific details. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid very short replies. For example, mention what kind of bike it was, who gave it to you, or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to the park almost every afternoon.

제안: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence stating your view, then add 1–2 specific supporting reasons using linking words (for example, 'however', 'because', 'in my experience'). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. If you lack direct knowledge, say so briefly and give a reasonable general observation about trends with an example or comparison.

예시: I think bikes have been popular in my country, but their use has changed recently. For example, in Japan cycling used to be common for commuting, however nowadays more people use trains and cars, so there are fewer daily cyclists.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses the past simple auxiliary did. The short affirmative response should use 'I did' rather than 'I had' to echo the auxiliary. Use 'I did' for concise past-tense answers; alternatively a full answer 'Yes, I had a bike' is also correct.

× I think so, but not now because now I, I live in America now so I don't know.

✓ I think so, but not anymore because I live in America now, so I don't know much about it.

The speaker repeats 'now' and uses awkward phrasing. 'Not anymore' correctly indicates a change from past to present. 'I live in America now' is present simple and 'so I don't know much about it' is a logical result clause. Use concise linking words and avoid repetition.

× I don't know much, but now is bikers mana is changed in Japan.

✓ I don't know much, but the biking culture in Japan has changed.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrases ('bikers mana'). Use 'the biking culture' or 'bicycle culture' as a noun phrase and present perfect 'has changed' to indicate a change up to the present. This corrects sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.

× But.

✓ However, I'm not sure about the current situation there.

A single word 'But.' is a sentence fragment without a subject or verb. Provide a complete clause to express contrast, such as 'However, I'm not sure about the current situation there.' This fixes the sentence fragment error and completes the thought.