Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatical and direct, but it is very brief. To improve, give a short topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, context, or brief example). Use a linking word if adding details to keep it coherent. Keep total length under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe to keep a bike there, so they never bought one. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives contrasting details, which is good. To improve, reduce hesitations (e.g., remove 'uh'), correct small grammar/word-choice issues, and use clearer linking words (e.g., 'however' or 'whereas') to signal contrast. Be more specific about examples or reasons for the trend. Keep answers concise and natural (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In cities, modern mountain and electric bikes have become trendy because they are efficient and fun to ride; however, in rural areas people still use older-style cycles mainly for daily chores and short trips.

× Our bikes are used in everywhere in our country.

✓ Our bikes are used everywhere in our country.

The phrase 'in everywhere' is ungrammatical because 'everywhere' is an adverb of place that does not require the preposition 'in'. Remove 'in' so the sentence reads 'used everywhere'. Alternative: 'are used all over our country.'

× Recently the new mountain bikes are becoming very much popular, uh, in city areas, but in the rural areas there are still old styled cycles.

✓ Recently the new mountain bikes have become very popular in urban areas, but in rural areas there are still old-style cycles.

Multiple issues addressed that match allowed types: 'are becoming very much popular' is awkward quantifier/adverb use; 'very much popular' is incorrect — use 'very popular' or 'much more popular'. Also tense: 'Recently... have become' fits recent change (present perfect) better than continuous 'are becoming' here. 'City areas' is better as 'urban areas'. 'old styled' should be 'old-style' (compound adjective). Suggestions: use 'have become very popular' or 'are becoming popular', 'very popular' instead of 'very much popular', and hyphenate compound adjectives like 'old-style'.