Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child."), then add one or two specific supporting details with correct past tense and linking words. Avoid confusing phrases ("in my calendar") and inconsistent future/past tenses ("I'll go").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit neighbors and play with friends. For example, every Sunday my family and I would cycle to a nearby park for a picnic, which I always enjoyed.

제안: Give a clear opinion then support it with specific, coherent reasons and examples. Use linking words (because, for example, also) and correct grammar ("people ride bikes", "they are used to transport goods"). Avoid repetition and unclear terms like "rapido" without explanation — instead name the service or describe it briefly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute short distances and small businesses transport goods on two-wheelers. Also, informal taxi-style motorbike services are common in cities, which makes them even more widespread.

× Yes, I have a bike in my calendar.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'have' is incorrect. Use past simple 'had' to match the time reference. Also 'in my calendar' is odd and unrelated; likely intended to mean 'when I was a child.' Replace with 'when I was a child' to clarify meaning.

× I used to ride every day and I used to enjoy a lot riding a bike.

✓ I used to ride it every day and I enjoyed riding a lot.

Repetition of 'used to' is acceptable but here 'enjoy' should be past simple 'enjoyed' to maintain consistent tense. Also add object 'it' or 'my bike' after 'ride' for clarity and change word order to 'enjoyed riding a lot.'

× And along with my friends and family, I'll go to a trip in my bike and I go to a picnic.

✓ And I used to go on trips with my friends and family on my bike and we went on picnics.

The student switches to future 'I'll go' and present 'I go' but the context is past habitual actions. Use past habitual 'used to' or past simple 'went.' Also 'go to a trip' is ungrammatical; correct phrasing is 'go on trips.' Use 'on my bike' for the correct preposition.

× Everyone rides bike here because it is easy to transport from place to place so and in in bikes everybody transport goods.

✓ Everyone rides bikes here because they are easy to use for transport from place to place, and people also use bikes to transport goods.

'Everyone rides bike' needs plural 'bikes' or 'a bike.' Subject 'everyone' takes singular verbs but the noun should be plural in this context. 'It is easy to transport' is unclear; use 'they are easy to use for transport.' 'Everybody transport' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; change to 'people also use bikes to transport goods.' Remove repeated 'in in.'

× It is easy to pick up and drop.

✓ They are easy to pick up and drop off.

The verb phrase requires the particle 'off' after 'drop' to convey 'drop off' (leave somewhere). Also agree with plural subject 'they.' Alternatively, 'easy to pick up and put down' could be used.

× And bikes are also used in a kind of rapido in in my country it.

✓ Bikes are also used as a kind of 'rapido' in my country.

'Used in a kind of rapido' is awkward and includes an extra 'in' and a dangling 'it.' Recast the sentence to 'used as a kind of 'rapido'' (if 'rapido' is a local term) and remove the extraneous words. Ensure the sentence ends properly.