Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two concise supporting details. Use correct grammar (past tense) and avoid repetition. For example, say you either had or didn’t have a bike, explain briefly why (e.g., size, safety, or learning age), and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because there weren’t any child-sized bicycles available in my neighborhood. As a result, I learned to ride later at age twelve when a relative gave me a suitable bike.

제안: Answer directly and correct general grammar and word choice. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “bicycles,” “commute,” “work,” “students”). Give a brief reason and a specific example, and use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Avoid incorrect phrases like “go to war.”

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Japan, especially in cities like Tokyo, because they are convenient and affordable. For example, many students and office workers commute short distances by bike to avoid traffic and save money.

× I didn't know how to bike when I was a child, but I didn't have a. Bicycle with this small size of bicycle for for kids.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bicycle when I was a child, and I didn't have such a small bicycle for kids.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect verb choice 'bike' used as verb and noun, misplaced period creating a fragment, repeated word 'for', and awkward phrasing. According to the Grammar Problem Type List, this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'ride a bicycle' for the action, join clauses with 'and' (or restructure), remove the stray period, replace 'this small size of bicycle' with 'such a small bicycle', and remove the repeated 'for'. Suggestion: practice choosing correct verb-noun collocations ('ride a bicycle') and proofreading to avoid fragments and repetitions.

× Every bikes are very popular in my country which is Japan, especially in Tokyo where most people use bike to go to school or go to war.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country, Japan, especially in Tokyo, where most people use bikes to go to school or to commute.

This sentence contains incorrect quantifier and agreement ('Every bikes' is wrong) and other issues: awkward clause 'which is Japan' and wrong phrase 'go to war'. According to the Grammar Problem Type List, the main error is incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and also subject-verb agreement and word choice. Replace 'Every bikes' with 'Bicycles' or 'Every bike' depending on meaning; here 'Bicycles are very popular' is natural. Use commas for apposition 'my country, Japan', plural noun 'bikes' in the second clause, and change 'go to war' to an appropriate verb like 'commute' or 'travel' — likely 'commute' or 'go to school'. Suggestion: learn countable noun quantifiers ('every' + singular noun, e.g. 'every bike') and use correct collocations ('go to school', 'commute').