Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, grammatically correct and use clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Correct verb choices (ride, not drive) and avoid filler words. For example, briefly state you had a bike, describe why you stopped using it, and include a specific time or result.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, after a major accident when I was about eight, I stopped riding it for safety reasons. As a result, I preferred walking or taking a bus for several years.

제안: Answer directly, avoid hesitations and give specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct collocations (use bikes for daily travel; in India -> in my country/India). Mention reasons or examples (economy, convenience, traffic) to make your answer more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. Many people use them for daily travel because they are inexpensive and can navigate heavy traffic easily, especially in small towns and crowded cities.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I loved to drop that, but I had a major accident and when I was a child then I stopped driving this.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I loved to ride it, but I had a major accident and then I stopped riding it.

The sentence uses incorrect verb choice and awkward phrasing. 'Loved to drop that' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'ride'. 'Driving' is usually used for cars; for bikes use 'ride'. Redundant time phrase 'when I was a child then' is unnecessary — use 'then' only. Use object pronoun 'it' for the bike. Suggestion: replace 'drop' with 'ride', replace 'driving this' with 'riding it', and remove redundant words to make the past-tense narrative clear.

× Yes, I feel bikes are very popular in my country and a lot of people. MMM they use bike for their daily basis travelling and and in India.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and many people use them for daily travel in India.

The original has fragmented structure and incorrect word order. 'I feel' is acceptable but 'I think' is more natural. 'and a lot of people.' is a sentence fragment — combine clauses. 'MMM' is filler and should be omitted. 'use bike' lacks plural and article; use 'use them' or 'use bikes'. 'daily basis travelling' is ungrammatical; use 'daily travel'. Place 'in India' at the end. Suggestion: remove fillers, combine clauses into one complete sentence, use plural pronoun 'them' or 'bikes', and use the correct noun phrase 'daily travel'.