Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, thì và đại từ (ví dụ: 'were' -> 'was', 'a shy' không rõ nghĩa), đồng thời nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sửa phát âm từ gây hiểu nhầm (ví dụ: 'bike' bị nói sai). Hãy dùng liên từ đơn giản (e.g., 'but', 'so', 'because') để kết nối ý. Luyện nói chậm, phát âm rõ và kiểm tra thì quá khứ khi kể chuyện.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was a child. It was very cute, but I didn’t use it much because I wasn’t very good at riding. However, I enjoyed decorating it with stickers.

제안: Cần dùng từ vựng chính xác ('pies' -> 'bikes') và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng bằng lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để làm ý mạch lạc (ví dụ: 'because', 'for example'). Nên nói rõ mức độ phổ biến và nêu nguyên nhân ngắn gọn.

예시: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, many cities have public bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient. However, I don’t usually use them myself because I prefer public transport.

× Pies are very popular in my country and there are lot of public pies that you can you can get in the in the half.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country and there are a lot of public bikes that you can get in the city.

The student used 'Pies' instead of 'Bikes' (wrong word) and omitted the article 'a' before 'lot'; also 'pies' plural is incorrect word choice. Use 'a lot of' for quantity and keep the noun 'bikes' plural to match. Also 'in the half' is unclear and likely meant 'in the city' or 'in many places'. Suggestion: replace the incorrect noun, include the indefinite article 'a' before 'lot', and use a clear location phrase.

× I did have a bike when I were a shy a pink by very cute and also I don't use I didn't use this much because I've no I used to be bad at that point, yes.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child. It was pink and very cute. I didn't use it much because I wasn't good at riding then.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'were' should be 'was' for first/third singular past (verb agreement), 'shy' is wrong word choice for 'child', mixing present tense 'don't use' with past 'didn't use' is inconsistent. 'I've no' is wrong; use 'I didn't' or 'I had no' depending on meaning. 'Used to be bad at that point' should be 'wasn't good at riding then.' Suggestion: separate into clear sentences, use past simple consistently for past facts, use correct subject-verb agreement ('was'), and choose correct vocabulary ('child', 'riding').

× I did have a bike when I were a shy a pink by very cute and also I don't use I didn't use this much because I've no I used to be bad at that point, yes.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child; it was pink and very cute. I didn't use it much because I wasn't good at riding then.

The original is a run-on with repeated words and mixed structures. Fix by splitting into coherent clauses, removing repetitions, and ordering information logically (possession, description, explanation). Suggestion: keep one idea per clause and avoid repeating auxiliaries.

× also I don't use I didn't use this much because I've no I used to be bad at that point, yes.

✓ I didn't use it much because I wasn't good at riding then.

Pronoun 'this' is vague; 'it' refers clearly to the bike. 'I've no' is nonstandard; use 'I didn't have' or 'I wasn't'. Maintain consistent pronoun reference and tense. Suggestion: use 'it' for the bike and keep past tense for past habits.

× there are lot of public pies that you can you can get in the in the half.

✓ there are a lot of public bikes that you can find in the city.

'Omittion of article 'a' before 'lot' and 'in the half' is incorrect prepositional phrase. Use 'in the city' or 'in many places' to indicate location. Also 'get in the' is awkward; 'find in' or 'rent in' are better depending on meaning. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'lot' and use an appropriate location expression.