Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear, direct answer first, then add one or two concise supporting details. Use correct verb tense and simple, accurate vocabulary. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetition. Link your supporting detail with a word like “because” or “so” and be specific about timing and feelings (for example: “When I was in middle school I bought my first bike because I needed to travel to school”).

예시: Yes. I bought my first bicycle when I was in middle school because I needed a way to get to school. It was a simple, second-hand bike and I remember feeling excited and a little nervous until I learned how to ride properly.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes or No) and follow with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Use accurate nouns (transportation, people) and avoid vague fillers. Provide a concrete example or contrast (e.g., city vs. countryside) to make your answer more informative.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people in cities use bicycles to avoid traffic, while in rural areas they are used for daily errands and commuting to work.

× You're buying a bite of bike when was in the, uh, middle school.

✓ I bought a bike when I was in middle school.

The original mixes present progressive 'You're buying' with a past time reference and has missing subjects ('was in the'). Use simple past 'I bought' for a completed past action and include the subject 'I' before 'was'. Also 'a bite of bike' is erroneous; use 'a bike'. Suggestion: Use simple past for past events and include necessary subjects: 'I bought a bike when I was in middle school.'

× That's uh, that's my first time bike, uh, bike.

✓ That was my first bike.

The phrase 'first time bike' is ungrammatical and subject pronoun/tense mismatches occur. 'That was' (past) matches the past reference. 'My first bike' is the correct noun phrase. Suggestion: Use 'That was my first bike.' for past identification.

× So I feel like XI and because I don't know how should I know the tech bike.

✓ I felt nervous because I didn't know how to ride the bike.

The original contains unclear fragments ('XI', 'tech bike') and mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. For recalling a past feeling, use past tense: 'I felt'. The infinitive 'how to ride' is the correct verb pattern, not 'how should I know'. Suggestion: Use 'I felt nervous because I didn't know how to ride the bike.'

× So that's I think I think that's why you.

✓ So I think that's why.

The sentence is redundant and incomplete ('why you' is unnecessary). Removing repetition and the extraneous word yields a clear clause. Suggestion: Keep it concise: 'So I think that's why.'

× You know, side then, yeah, I think so.

✓ You know, yes, I think so.

'Side then' is not meaningful here; likely filler. 'Yes' is the appropriate acknowledgement. Maintain present tense for general opinions: 'I think so.' Suggestion: Use clear discourse markers: 'You know, yes, I think so.'

× Uh, in my country, your bike is, uh, one of the most, uh, pop popular the transport station, uh, but dependent person.

✓ In my country, the bicycle is one of the most popular means of transportation, especially for people who depend on it.

The original misuses 'your bike' instead of 'the bicycle' or 'bikes', and 'pop popular the transport station' is garbled. Use 'one of the most popular means of transportation'. 'But dependent person' should be expressed as 'especially for people who depend on it.' Suggestion: Use 'In my country, the bicycle is one of the most popular means of transportation, especially for people who depend on it.'

× But you know, it's like that that that's just like the in in my option.

✓ But you know, that's just my opinion.

The original repeats fillers and uses 'in my option' incorrectly; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion' or 'my opinion.' Simplify to 'that's just my opinion.' Suggestion: Say 'But you know, that's just my opinion.'

× I would say it's popular transportation in my country.

✓ I would say it's a popular form of transportation in my country.

'Popular transportation' is awkward; use 'a popular form of transportation' or 'a popular means of transportation.' Article 'a' is needed. Suggestion: 'I would say it's a popular form of transportation in my country.'