Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Используйте правильные времена и порядок слов, давайте чёткое вступление и последующие детали, избегая лишних повторов. Например, начните с простого утверждения в прошедшем времени, затем объясните, как вы научились кататься и кто подарил вам велосипед. Свяжите предложения связующими словами и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, «didn't have», «learned to ride», «my dad bought me a bike»).

예시: I didn't have a bike at first. Later I learned to ride one with my friends, and eventually my dad bought me a new bike, which I enjoyed riding every weekend.

제안: Дайте прямой ответ и затем пояснение с конкретными причинами и примерами. Избегайте неуверённых вводных слов («uh»), используйте согласование существительных и предлогов (например, «most people drive cars», «many people walk on the streets»). Добавьте одно-два конкретных примера, почему велосипеды непопулярны (например, инфраструктура, климат).

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people drive cars because the roads and weather make cycling difficult, and there are few bike lanes in cities, so people prefer other transport.

× When I was a child I don't have a bike but I learned it have to ride a bike with my friends and my dad bought me a new bike.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike, but I learned how to ride a bike with my friends and my dad later bought me a new one.

Several tense and verb form errors: 'When I was a child' sets past context, so use past simple 'didn't have' instead of present 'don't have'. 'I learned it have to ride' is ungrammatical; use 'I learned how to ride' (learn + how + infinitive). 'My dad bought me a new bike' is OK for past, but adding 'later' clarifies sequence; 'a new one' avoids repetition. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in the past by using past simple forms and use 'learned how to + verb' for acquiring skills.

× I don't think so. But uh, in our country most of people ride a car and a lot of people work, walk in the streets and actually we don't use bike.

✓ I don't think so. But in our country most people drive cars, many people commute on foot, and actually we don't use bikes much.

Multiple grammar and word choice issues: 'most of people' should be 'most people' (phrase collocation). 'ride a car' is incorrect collocation; use 'drive cars'. 'a lot of people work, walk in the streets' is awkward; 'many people commute on foot' or 'walk in the streets' depending on meaning. 'we don't use bike' mismatches number and article; use plural 'bikes' and add adverb 'much' for frequency. Also keep present tense for general statements. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('most people', 'drive cars', 'commute on foot') and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generically.