Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler or unclear words, and give one or two supporting details. Use correct word forms and simple linking if needed.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it every day to go to school and visit my friends, and I remember practicing tricks in the park on weekends.

제안: Good content and direct answer, but reduce hesitations and add a specific reason or example to support your view using a linking word (e.g., because, for example). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many teenagers use bicycles to commute to school or hang out with friends in the evenings.

× Side yes I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

The original sentence includes an extraneous word 'Side' that makes the sentence ungrammatical and disrupts sentence structure. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove the stray word and punctuate correctly. Suggestion: keep answers concise and directly respond 'Yes, I did.'

× I believe that bikes are very popular in our country, mostly, uh, teenagers.

✓ I believe that bikes are very popular in our country, mostly among teenagers.

The phrase 'mostly, uh, teenagers' omits a necessary preposition to link 'mostly' and the group it describes. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/prepositional linking (ID 12 and 11); per the provided list choose the closest type: use a preposition. The correct form is 'mostly among teenagers' or 'especially among teenagers.' Suggestion: use 'among' to show which group the adverb 'mostly' refers to and avoid filler words like 'uh.'

× They really like to ride bikes.

✓ They really like riding bikes.

Both 'like to ride bikes' and 'like riding bikes' are grammatical; however, in this conversational context 'like riding bikes' sounds more natural and concise. The original isn't strictly wrong but stylistically 'riding' may be preferred. Note: this is a minor sentence-structure/style adjustment (ID 26). Suggestion: prefer 'like riding bikes' for natural spoken English and avoid unnecessary repetition.'