Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear past-tense response, then add one or two specific supporting details (reason or brief context). Use linking words like "because" or "so" and keep it under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment with limited storage. As a result, my parents preferred to buy toys that took up less space, so I mainly rode scooters or walked to school.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion but has grammatical errors and filler words. Start with a topic sentence, then add specific reasons and a brief example or contrast. Use linking words like "because", "for example", or "as a result" and avoid fillers such as "uh".

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because urban traffic is often congested, making bikes a faster option for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or use e-bikes to avoid long bus waits, which also helps reduce commuting costs.

× No, I can't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so a past simple negative response is required. 'Can't' is a present tense modal for ability or permission and is inappropriate here. Use 'didn't' (did not) to negate possession in the past. Suggestion: use past simple for yes/no questions about past events: 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, bike is too popular in my country because of uh heavy traffic jamming and all the areas.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because of heavy traffic jams and limited space in many areas.

Multiple issues apply but per instruction we correct only those matching the provided list: singular/plural and word choice tied to quantifiers. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to bicycles in general. Also 'is' should match plural ('are') — this is subject-verb agreement but mapped in the list as singular/plural. 'Too popular' sounds odd; 'very popular' is more natural. 'Traffic jamming' is nonstandard; the correct noun is 'traffic jams'. 'All the areas' is vague; 'many areas' or 'limited space in many areas' is clearer. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about general trends and choose standard collocations like 'traffic jams.'