Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is correct and concise, but it's very short. To get a higher score, add one or two brief details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, or a memory) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it natural and avoid long sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and clarity problems and repeats words. Improve accuracy by using correct verb forms and clearer reasoning. Start with a topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many teenagers cannot drive or own a motorbike, so they use bicycles to travel to school and visit friends. For example, most students cycle to class in the mornings during the school year.

× Yes, it's popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they're popular in my country.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural). The verb 'to be' must agree with a plural subject, so 'it's' (it is) is incorrect. Use 'they're' (they are) for plural subjects. Suggestion: identify the subject number before choosing the verb form (singular 'is'/'it's' vs plural 'are'/'they're').

× When you when you are under 18, you don't have driver, you don't have motorbike, so the bike have you a lot.

✓ When you are under 18, you don't have a driver's license and you don't have a motorbike, so you use bikes a lot.

Multiple errors corrected that match types in the list: duplicate phrase 'When you when you' removed (sentence structure), missing article before 'driver' and wrong noun form corrected to 'a driver's license' (article errors and word choice), 'motorbike' kept but 'a' added, and 'the bike have you a lot' has subject-verb order and agreement problems. 'You use bikes a lot' uses correct present simple tense for habitual action and correct plural agreement. Suggestions: avoid repeating phrases, use appropriate nouns ('driver's license' for permission to drive), include articles ('a'), and match verb form to subject ('you use' not 'bike have you').