Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers clear and directly relevant. Start with a simple topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers (umm, actually) and unclear phrases. Use correct tense and simple vocabulary to describe past experiences. Aim for 2–4 coherent sentences and use linking words (for example, when, because, so) to connect ideas.

예시: No, I didn’t have a proper bike when I was a child. Instead, I rode a small plastic tricycle at home because my parents thought it was safer. As I grew older, I learned to ride a bicycle at around ten years old, and I practiced in the park every weekend.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No/Opinion) and then give 1–2 specific reasons with a linking word. Use correct grammar for present perfect or simple present (e.g., ‘are more popular now’). Replace vague phrases with specific examples (e.g., bike lanes, bike-sharing schemes) and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are more popular now than in the past. One reason is that many cities have introduced bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, which make cycling safer and more convenient. Also, people are more environmentally conscious, so they often choose bikes instead of cars for short trips.

× Honestly, umm actually do not learn about bike since I was young because when my childhood you are all I remember is I will suck, I circle with bite and I will also have the.

✓ Honestly, I actually did not learn to ride a bike when I was young. From my childhood I only remember that I fell, I rode in circles, and I also had a few scratches.

The original sentence has multiple structure and tense issues making it unintelligible (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Errors include missing subject 'I' with the verb 'do not learn', incorrect tense for past events ('since I was young' requires past tense 'did not learn'), incorrect verb forms ('learn about bike' should be 'learn to ride a bike'), and incoherent phrases ('you are all I remember', 'I will suck', 'I circle with bite'). Correction splits the meaning into clear past-tense clauses and uses appropriate verbs: 'did not learn', 'I fell', 'I rode in circles', 'had scratches'. Suggestion: express each idea as a separate clause, use past tense consistently for childhood events, include necessary subjects, and choose accurate verbs and nouns (ride a bike, fall, scratch).

× Actually I think it been more popular than the past because people are care more about the environment and they get to use the bike rather than use a car to protect the environment and nature.

✓ Actually, I think it is more popular now than in the past because people care more about the environment and choose to use bikes rather than cars to protect nature.

This sentence shows incorrect present-tense forms and word choice issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'It been' is incorrect; the correct present form is 'it is'. 'Than the past' should be 'than in the past'. 'People are care' is wrong; use 'people care'. 'Get to use the bike' is awkward; use 'choose to use bikes'. Maintain consistent simple present tense to describe general trends. Suggestion: use 'is' for current states, 'in the past' for comparison, and simple present verbs like 'care' and 'choose' for general facts.