Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatical and add one or two specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and phrasing, then use a linking word to add detail (e.g., "because", "so", "and"). Avoid vague language like "usually like the". Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and explore my neighbourhood, and it helped me learn to be independent.

제안: Give a full sentence and add specific reasons or examples using linking words to support your opinion. Use one or two supporting details to make the answer natural and informative.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise, and cities are adding bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I usually like the.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I usually liked it.

The original sentence uses the wrong pronoun and tense. 'the' is not a pronoun and is incomplete; it should be the object pronoun 'it' referring to 'a bike'. Also, the sentence refers to a past habitual preference, so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Combine these to 'usually liked it' to match the past context. Suggestion: Use correct object pronouns ('it') and align verb tense with the time frame (past) when describing past habits.

× Yes, very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The original reply is a fragment missing a subject and verb. In context the question asks about 'bikes', so a complete sentence needs the subject 'they' (referring to bikes) and the present tense verb 'are' to state a general truth. Suggestion: Provide a full sentence with subject and verb, e.g., 'Yes, they are very popular.'