Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and add a short supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence in the past tense, then add one brief detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it to 1–3 sentences. Also correct verb forms and articles.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed a friend's bike to ride around the neighborhood.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No or A little), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "since", "however"). Use plural/singular forms correctly and choose natural collocations ("motorcycles" or "motorbikes").

예시: Not really; bicycles are less common in my country because most people prefer cars and motorcycles for convenience. However, they are becoming more popular in some cities for short trips and exercise.

× I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about past possession (when you were a child), so the past simple should be used. The original uses present tense 'don't have' which is inconsistent with 'when I was child'. Also 'a child' needs the article 'a'. Use 'didn't have' for negative past simple. Suggestion: use past simple for past-time statements and include articles correctly.

× I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The noun 'child' requires the indefinite article 'a' in this context ('a child'). The original omitted it. Combine this correction with using past tense: 'didn't have' + 'a child'.

× No, mostly our country will use transportations like cars and motorbike.

✓ No, mostly people in my country use transportation like cars and motorbikes.

The original uses 'will use' which implies future, but the question asks about general popularity (present habitual). Use present simple 'use'. Also 'our country' is odd; 'people in my country' is more natural. 'Transportation' is an uncountable noun; 'transportations' is incorrect. 'Motorbike' should be plural to match 'cars' or use 'motorcycles'.

× No, mostly our country will use transportations like cars and motorbike.

✓ No, mostly people in my country use transportation like cars and motorbikes.

'Transportations' is incorrect — 'transportation' is uncountable. 'Motorbike' should be plural when listing with 'cars'. Ensure number agreement when listing examples: 'cars and motorbikes'.

× No, mostly our country will use transportations like cars and motorbike.

✓ No, mostly people in my country use transportation like cars and motorbikes.

Saying 'our country will use' implies the country itself uses vehicles; it's better to say 'people in my country use'. This fixes pronoun/reference and improves sentence structure to express habitual action.